
Officer 01 / 04
Harvard Business School
Dr. Elena Park
Former Associate Director of Admissions · 2014 – 2022
"The strongest HBS essays don't argue for the candidate. They show a moment of judgment and let the reader draw the conclusion."
Elena spent eight cycles on the HBS admissions committee, where she read first-round files for every industry pool and chaired the leadership-impact calibration sessions every fall. Before HBS she was a McKinsey engagement manager working with healthcare clients, which gave her a near-religious dislike of essays that sound like consulting deck bullets dressed up in prose.
What she looked for, in plain terms: a decision the candidate made where they could have done the comfortable thing and chose not to, and a clear sense of what they learned about themselves in the room afterward. Everything else — title, comp, deal size — was context the committee already had from the resume.
On the MBA Essay Critic rubric, Elena owns the HBS scoring model and the leadership-impact dimension across every school. The two questions she trained the rubric to ask of every essay are 'what was the judgment?' and 'who is different because of it?'
Credentials
- EdD, Higher Education Leadership — University of Pennsylvania
- Former Engagement Manager, McKinsey & Company (Healthcare practice)
- Co-author of two internal HBS calibration guides used to onboard new readers
- 1,247 HBS interview reports filed over her tenure









