Specificity
9/10Weight 15%
Excellent use of names (Ana, Marcus) and specific industry details like 'trailer availability' and 'shippers who always loaded late.' The mention of Friday one-on-ones adds a tangible routine to the leadership claim.
- Keep: "carriers lied about trailer availability"
- Keep: "Friday afternoons for one-on-ones"
- Cut or fix: "missing: the specific name of the freight brokerage"